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英语六级写作真题练习:收入差距

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  大学英语六级写作部分一直是考生获取高分的拦路虎,也是制约学生获取高分的瓶颈。要想打破这个瓶颈,在平时必须加强对写作技巧的练习,只有多练才能在考试中写出一篇好文章。下面学习啦小编为大家带来英语六级写作真题练习,希望对大家的学习有所帮助!

  英语六级写作真题练习:收入差距

  Directions : For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Do Lucky Numbers Really Bring Good Luck?

  You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below :

  有些人认为收入差距的存在是合理的

  有些人认为收人差距的存在是不合理的

  收入差距对社会的影响

  参考范文

  As regards the income gap, there has been a heated discussionamong the general public in our society. Some people hold that the gap is natural because it reflects different contributions that different people make in their work. In their view, those people who work harder, bring higher efficiency,and create more wealth,deserve a much higherpay.

  By contrast,others view this gap negatively. According to a recent survey conducted by China Daily,a high proportion (56. 7 percent) of people believe that a lot of crimes happen as a result of this income gap. In fact,experts have long found out that most cases of crime are directly related to low income. What’s more,income gap may destroy the satisfaction that they obtain from work.

  The income gap has a significant impact on the whole society. This gap may motivate people to devote to their work. When this gap is growing too wide, however, our government should make some policies to get rid of its negative consequences.

  快捷构思

  第一段:在模板句引人话题后接着提出首段中心“有些人认为 收人差距的存在是合理的”,并用reflects different con­tributions that different people make in their work 这个原 因来支持段落中心。

  第二段:开门见山展现段落中心“有些人认为收入差距的存在 是不合理的”。而后“一句话”数例为具体现象展示, 说明很多人认为收人差距会导致犯罪的事件的发生, 实际也是个原因支持。最后呈现另一个并列的原因: 收入差距使得人们从工作中获得的满意度降低了。

  第三段:直接展现段落中心“收入差距对社会的影响”,并用Four motivate people to devote to their work 来支持。最后, 呼吁政府采取措施避免收入差距的不良影响。

  加分短语

  1. In their view, those people who work harder, bring higher efficiency, and create more wealth, deserve a much higher pay.他们认为:工作努力、效率高、创造更多财富的人,应 该获得更高的收人。(并列短语的运用是一大亮点。)

  2.have a significant impact on 对 有很大影响

  3.devote to奉献、贡献

  4.get rid of 摆脱

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