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英语六级写作范文精讲:收集的好处

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  英语六级写作范文精讲:收集的好处

  Some small things are collected delibe rately in the home in an attempt to avoid waste . Among these I would list string and brown paper , kept by th rifty people when a pa rcel has been opened , to save buying these two r equisites . Howeve r , collecting as a serious hobby is quite dif ferent and has many advantages .

  Fir stly , it provides relaxa tion for leisur e hours , just as looking at one’s t reas ure is always a pleas ur e . One does not have to go outside for amusement , since the collection is housed at home . Whatever it con sists of , stamps , records , pictures , model cars , stuffed birds , toy animals , ther e is always something to do in connection with it , f rom finding the right place for the latest addition to verifying facts in refer ence books . Consequently, one’s knowledge expands .

  Secondly , this hobby educates one not only in the chosen subject , but also in gene ral mat ters which have some bearing on it , for instance, to meet like-minded collectors , to get advice , to compare notes , to show off the latest find , and so on . In this way , one’s cir cle of f riends grows .

  Thirdly , the hobby soon leads to tr avel , perhaps to a meeting in anothe r town , possibly a t rip abroad in sear ch of rare specimen ( for collectors ar e not confined to one country) . Over the years one may well become an authority on one’s hobby and will very probably be asked to give informal t alks to little gatherings and then , if succes sful , to large r audience . In so doing self-confidence grows , first from mastering a subject , then f rom being able to talk about it .

  In conclusion , collecting , by occupying spar e time so constr uctively , makes a per son contented , with no time for bor edom

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  结构分析:

  · 收藏是一种爱好, 不同于存放日常用品

  · 收藏的好处

  * Relaxation and pleasur e

  * Enlarge one’s circle of friends

  * Travel and meet more people

  ·结论

  * Use time const ructively

  * No boredom

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  内容分析:

  本文是一篇议论文。第一段是引子, 说明人们常常存放一些日常使用的小东西以备不时之需, 但这不是收藏。收藏是一种爱好, 甚至是一种终生爱好。以下三段分列收藏的好处, 紧扣主题, 而每一段的最后一句都写出了结果, 用了consequently ,in this way , in so doing 三个过渡词语。最后一段是一个简单的概括。学习本文应注意模仿使用不同的句式。

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  万能句型:

  delibe rately ad . 故意

  in an a ttempt to + v . 为了, 企图

  st ring n . 线

  brown paper 牛皮纸

  thrif ty people 节俭的人们

  requisit e n . 必需品

  relaxa tion n . 休息, 放松

  amusement n . 娱乐

  be housed at home 藏在家中

  stuffed birds 填鸟

  toy animals 玩具动物

  in connection with . . . 与⋯⋯有关

  the latest addition 最新的收藏品

  verifying facts in refe rence book s 在参考书中查证事实

  have some bearing on it 与⋯⋯有关

  like-minded collector s 想法相同的收藏者

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